Mrs Priya Ram Kapoor being the wife of an illustrious businessman re-defined
the art of tantrum throwing.She was not the kind of wife who demanded superficial
things but rather fought for something far more precious to her, her husbands valuable time. Today all she wanted was Ram
by her side at her gynae appointment. This however left him perplexed being far away from her in Dubai facing a rather difficult business negotiation. To achieve today’s end result on her part all it
took was a bit of shouting, a bit of screaming, a hanging threat, an overdose of guilt and some
serious sulking to bring her husband to a quandary.
In trying to get back to her in record time he had to beat the natural odds against him, putting up with a time difference of +1 hour 30minutes and a commercial
flying time of 3 hours to get to Mumbai. In his private jet he was pushing for less
than 2 hours and 15 minutes. He knew he was literally a
screwed man butIf he was the lion then she
was surely the lioness who was ready to rip him apart for daring to
leave her alone. Was he a henpecked husband? God only knows she
had a controlling power over him like no other. When she commanded he was left with no choice. He hated her sulking treatment which
she was master off and knowing better he’d rather be a love struck puppy than a victim to his hell cat’s fury. This was a love story that was beyond
normal, it was obsession and possession all in one keeping us glued to the goings on in
their daily lives.It was quiet evident that he should never mess with his pregnant wife or his life would surely be hell. In lay man's terms it meant his life was fucked.
Earlier
that morning Sheikh Mohammad Bin Hussain Al Khalifa was testament to this
husband’s madness when at exactly 8.00am Ram Kapoor walked into the sun room
of the Sheikh’s palace.The old man was
sitting on his brocaded armchair indulging in delectable pastries while sipping
on strong black Arabic coffee. Mr Kapoor he said, good to see you here bright and
early. Ram in all seriousness said let’s cut to the chase Sheikh I am a busy man
and don’t have time for your stalling , I’ve ensured that all your demands were
met in this deal if you don’t want to sign it, then so be it but I’m leaving
Dubai within the next 30 minutes. For a
few seconds the Sheikh silently assessed his demure and asked, Mr Kapoor may I
know why the hurry?Ram said without
hesitation I have a pregnant wife that I need to get back too, I seriously
don’t have the time to be here. So Sheikh without being crude you can
literally take this deal and shove it if it's not what you want. With his hand resting casually on the
arm rest the old Sheikh listened while stroking his grey beard, I see he said so you prepared to throw our
deal aside just to get back home to your wife?Exactly Ram said.The Sheikh
laughed most heartily and gestured for Ram to sit down, Mr Kapoor have an almond pastry it will surely
sweeten your mood addressing his man
servant the Sheikh said, Mustafa serve Mr Kapoor some coffee he needs some of
our strong rich flavors to brighten his day.
Sheikh are you not hearing me I said I don’t have time, I
know what you said Mr Kapoor just sit down.Ram annoyed but out of courteousness sat opposite the Sheikh.So Mr Kapoor you love your wife? Ram nodded
his head yes I do. That’s very good I’m glad to hear that. The Sheikh said, you
see I loved my wife dearly we were married for 52 years when she passed away.Till her dying day I loved only her she was
the mother of my eight children. We were truly blessed with a happy life together
but one day when we least expected it, it all changed for us. The Sheikh in a somber mood down memory lane said, with all the money
in the world I could not save her from her death, you see she was diagnosed with
breast cancer and over the years we slowly watched this strong woman loose her hope and her will to live. Sadly Ram listened, surprised
and regretfully he said to the Sheikh I’m really sorry for your loss sir.In Emirati culture a man never discussed his
personal life and you were barred from daring to ask about his family therefore
Ram was taken aback by the Sheik’s openness.The Sheikh cleared his throat give
me the contract Mr Kapoor I’ll sign it.Ram was speechless, what he asked again, the contract Mr Kapoor? Ram produced the papers for the Sheikh to sign,
sir may I know why you changed your mind?The sheikh laughed, its simple Mr Kapoor love it’s all about love. You
love your wife and that makes me think you the man I want to do business with.
So here he was back in Mumbai The Ram Kapoor driving his wife to their love
nest, an exclusive apartment that belonged solely to them for some quiet
solitude of tender loving care without disturbances, without interferences just
a desperate need of a husband and wife to belong to each other completely. He still had to placate her
the only way he could, stepping out of
their private elevator into their luxurious apartment Ram pushed Priya against
the wall taking her by total surprise. Lifting her eyebrow she questioned him,
why Mr Kapoor did you have something in mind? She seductively bit into her lower
lip while her eyes bewitched him. He closed in on her their noses touching,
running his finger along the side of her jaw line he said, Mrs Kapoor I do have
something in mind. Taking a quickened breath almost casually she said, I wonder
what that could be? He smiled at her cheekiness, its pretty
simple my love touching her parted lips with his I’ve been dying to kiss you like this.
Holding her head firmly in place he slipped his tongue into her mouth while their tongues mated on and on it went.She
gripped the back of his neck pulling him close while they kissed each other most
passionately. Finally letting up for some air their heavy breathing broke into the silence of
the apartment making the walls literally blush in their shyness.
I missed you he said,
I missed you so much. She said, if you remember correctly I’m not talking to
you. With a chuckle he said
I’ve had that line ringing in my ear from yesterdayitself. Looking at him bemused she
said well in that case you have no reason to forget it. He laughed but baby I’ve
redeemed myself.Oh really she said what
did you redeem?Well for starters I made
it back in time to be at your appointment.She lifted her eyebrow so does that mean I
should forgive you just like that? He said, without doubt off course you have
to forgive me. With a sparkle in his eye he brought on his devilish charm. She
said, I’ll have to think about it and he asked what does a guy have to do to get
a break here?That’s easy she said he
should never pull a stunt like that ever again.
But I told you I was never planning to stay over.That’s not it she said how would you feel if
I went away without informing you first of where I was going to? He thought for a
moment and said I’d go crazy. Exactly my point, she said. That’s how I felt
knowing you left without telling me first.Looking seriously at her I’m really sorry I didn’t stop to think please forgive me I’ll never do that again. Priya thought
for a few seconds with a glint in her eye she said well that’s not
my decision to make. He looked at her confused to answer his confusion she said
I have to check with my baby first. He laughed dropping down on his knee kissing
her stomach while he wrapped his arms around her waist bringing his mouth back lightly against
her stomach. Baby please tell mama not to be so difficult to forgive papa because papa is really sorry for what he did.
He glanced
up to look at her, their eyes met he continued to speak to his baby. If mama
forgives papa I’ll make her really happy tonight. She hit his shoulder, ouch clutching
his shoulder that hurts. Do you have no
shame talking to your baby like that? What did I say he asked innocently?She looked at him sternly don’t pull that
innocent face on me.He looked playfully
sad all I said I was going to make you really happy tonight just maybe I’m
planning to take you out for your kulfi treat.
All forgotten in an excited glee Priya was at her element really she asked, are you
really going to buy me kulfi? Off course he said. Using it to his full advantage he asked so am I forgiven? A few
seconds passed and she said yes, my baby thinks I should forgive you.He got up smiling that’s more like it. But can I remind you that’s my baby in there, oh really, proclaiming
his possessive streak yes its my baby.Correction she said it’s our baby.He looked at her amused I could live with that. Kissing her mouth soundly
he repeated it’s our baby.
You know Mrs Kapoor you really know how to play hard ball
she laughed well Mr Kapoor I have you to thank since you taught me all that I
know. He laughed, well if only I knew this earlier, you would what she asked? I
would have taught you to be an obedient wife instead. She looked at him horrified
I’m so going to kill you for that. He laughed in that case Mrs Kapoor can we
have our nap first? Are you sure it’s only a nap you talking about? With a naughty
smile he said have I ever lied to you? She said we’ll see about that. Let’s go he said as he led her up the stairs
to the master bedroom.
Walking in to the huge room without the fancy frills
of the candles and flowers from their first night here, she had the chance to admire
the view in its natural state totally loving every bit of what she saw.This room is so beautiful she said, Ram
watched his wife look around the room there’s only one beauty in
here and that’s you.She turned to face
him with her head slightly tilted her arms folded why Mr Kapoor I think you
trying to be nice to me? He looked at her and said but I’m always nice to you. With a mischievous look she said well that’s what you think. He made a grab for
her but she was quick she sidestepped him and ran behind the wingback
chairgiggling as he lunged after
her. You are so going to pay for that Mrs Kapoor, she giggled some more need I
remind you I’m pregnant, he lunged after heragain but once again she was quick.Oh
no you don’t he said, she grabbed a cushion from the chair and flung it at him to keep him away with the reflex of his hand he caught it in time,
oh you so going to get it when I get hold of you. He came after her and she ran
around trying to get away from him but this time he caught her. She screamed as
he tumbled her on the bed holding her arms above her head she laughed
hysterically as he tickled her that’s for giving me a hard time. No, no she
giggled some more stop please stop. Eventually he relented with both of them out
of breath he rolled off lying next to her.
For a few minutes there was just silence and only breathing,
with her hand to her chest she rolled onto her side to face him and he rolled onto
his side to face her. Picking up her hand he brought her palm to his lips
dropping a kiss on it.They both smiled
at each other she said to him thank you for coming back for me and our baby. I
love you Ram, I love you so much and he said I love you Priya more than you can
dream to imagine with tears in her eyes she said, I know, I know how much she
whispered.He brought her over him as she
buried her face into his neck holding him tight while he held her around her
lower back.She picked up her head and
kissed his mouth.I remember you said
something about taking a nap and he said so I did.He removed her blouse and she said but this
is far from taking a nap he chuckled, baby I’m only getting ourselves
comfortable he continued to remove both their clothing leaving her only in her
lacy panty and him in his brief.Pulling the cover aside he rolled her onto the soft silk sheet he went
in beside her pulling her close to him. So you see baby I kept my word.She smiled and he said sleep my angel she
closed her eyes he closed his as they drifted off to a secured sleep holding
each other close.
Outside the late afternoon turned into an early evening
sunset Priya woke up to an empty stomach feeling hungry getting up from bed she
went into the dressing room with everything beingall so new to her.Finally she located a thin robe slipping it
on she knotted the belt on her bulging waistline going downstairs her first
stop was the kitchen she opened the fridge and saw it was fully stocked,
closing it she opened a cupboard and found a selection of chocolates taking a slab with her she said
let’s go see what my big baby wants to eat first. She smiled with thoughts of
Ram and knew that she had to be the luckiest person having him for her husband. Yes she admits she gave him a hard time but in reasoning within herself she said,
but off course that’s a wife’s duty and she laughed going to find her big burly
lion.He was in the lounge bare feet wearing loose
fitted jeans and a skipper.His laptop
was on the coffee table while he looked at the screen talking to someone on his
Iphone.She silently watched him from
the doorway as she ate some of the chocolate.When he finally saw her standing there he smiled motioning her to
him.She went with ease sitting on his
lap lying against his shoulder while he finished his call. Did my baby have a
good sleep? hmmmm she said I did but I missed you. Sorry love I had some emails
to clear so that’s why I left you to sleep. She broke a piece of the chocolate
and fed it to him.He slipped his hands
into the V of her robe touching her bare breast with his finger he played
with her nipple, so what do you want to do, he asked her.
Totally relaxed and enjoying the feel of his hands on her she
said I’m hungry. Ok he said let’s go out to dinner.Let me prepare something for us to eat here
but I’d rather take you out he said we haven’t been out to dinner in a
while just the two of us, so I thought tonight would be perfect.Hmmmm ok she said but I’m really
starving.Well then let’s not delay I
can’t have my babies starving you go get ready while I make our dinner
reservation and I’ll be up now to dress.Where are we going, she asked?I
was thinking we’d go to the Souk at the Taj Mahal Palace.Are you ok with that, he asked? Honestly I don’t care I just need to eat.He laughed well then you better get your ass
moving.She blushed, he said if you
don’t get up now I will topple you over and make love to you right now because I’m
so hard for you baby I’m dying to feel myself inside you. She moved her
buttocks on him to feel his hardened length rub against her bottom. Priya he
warned, shhhhh she said sitting astride him with her knees pressed on either
side of him. Her robe came undone exposing her naked fuller breasts to
him.Sweet heart you realize you killing
me here, with passion in her eyes she said let me love you, let me show you how
much you mean to me.His jaw dropped
open while she moved forward pressing herself on him taking his lips in hers she
kissed him until he couldn’t even think straight.
Getting of his lap she kneeled on the floor in between his
wide spread legs.He asked her what are
you doing baby, taking her hand to his fly she cupped his hardness through his
roughened denims.Baby please don’t I
won’t be able to last, ignoring him she unzipped his jeans urging him lower on
the coach.When she freed him from his
restriction she took his hardened length in the palms of her hand stroking him
while he grew bigger and rock hard between her fingers.God love what are you doing to me?I just want to love you she said most
innocently touching the tip of her tongue to the tip of his penis circling his
tender flesh.With her mouth and hands
she moved on him taking him deeper into the recess of her mouth, sucking and
loving him with all that she had.Feeling
her mouth on him was beyond words he couldn’t even comprehend.All he could feel was her tongue sliding on him her teeth lightly grazing his sensitive skin while she sucked him, making him crazy. He pumped himself harder into her mouth and she took all of him reaching right down to the base of him. He urged her to stop but she continued her onslaught
making him come apart spilling himself into her mouth. She tasted the warm
thickened liquid from him, drinking all that he offered knowing that she alone could bring him to this point of no return.He was a complete man as she lapped off every
bit of his juices totally at a loss in this magical wonder. Once he calmed down to normalcy he
brought her up to him kissing her mouth tasting a bit of himself on her
lips.God baby that was just something,
thank you my love.Putting her finger
against his lip she said there is no thank you in our lovemaking.Let me love you he said and she said no I’m
fine that was for you alone.She kissed
his lips once again now I think I’m going to go get ready we have a starving
baby to feed.He chuckled and said yes I
need to feed both my babies so let’s go.
It was quite apparent to Priya that she was Ram’s end all
and be all of everything. Especially when he was prepared to throw away a
business deal to race back to her giving her the most endearing surprise at her
lowest moment, that moment when she missed him the most alone in the doctor’s
room. Without a doubt in her mind she loved him more than anything else in
this world.Yes she gave him a hard time
but let’s be realistic it was the wife’s job to put things into perspective. With a little pat on her back she congratulated herself for her cheekiness, she
knew she had Mr Kapoor twisted around her little finger she was proud of
her achievement because he was high maintenance demanding everything of her so
why not give him a taste of his own medicine. Seeing him satiated by her little
offerings of pleasure made her feel happy that she could with the skill of her
mouth and hands on his manhood love him most freely. Ram would never forget
the multitude of pleasurable sensations that ran through his entire body when
he shuddered in her mouth and when she licked every last bit of his offering it
was the most precious thing in the world to her.
So here they were almost 90 minutes later dressed in smart
casual clothing seated in mystic candle light for a fine dining experience at the Souk in the Casablanca room for
a truly authentic Middle Eastern cuisine that was certain to get any
palette mouth watering.Holding hands on
the table they laughed and joked like they usually did speaking of their
families and the upcoming wedding in the Kapoor family. They spoke about the
joy of seeing their baby today, their hopes and dreams of parenthood.Yes the food and conversation became a relaxed
delight for the lovers while around them they were totally ignorant to the many
patrons that viewed them in awe.Yes you
could never miss this special couple there was a chemistry between them
that could be felt in every sphere of the world not just in India alone. Be
it in the newspaper or a magazine, or a snippet on television it kept one spell
bounded for more.
Their waiter asked them if they were ready with their
dessert menu, Ram looked at Priya baby what would you like to eat for dessert, looking
through the selection she closed the menu I’m going to pass.Are you sure he asked again? Yes she smiled
with a lopsided grin if I remember correctly somebody promised to buy me kulfi
so that’s what I want.He laughed and
said ok madam lets go get your kulfi. Ram looked at the waiter and said thanks we done you can bring me the
bill.A little while later they were
walking through the foyer of The Taj Mahal Palace when Priya heard her name
being called she turned to see a lady with her baby in her arms and then she
smiled remembering them from the lift of the Four Seasons hotel the night of the
party.
Arpita yes that’s her name Priya went across to her and said
hi how are you?Arpita said hi this is
such a co-incidence bumping into you again.Priya said yes it surely is if I remember correctly you here for a few
days right, so are you enjoying Mumbai so far? Yes Arpita said well with the
little time that I’ve managed, this bundle here has kept me fully occupied.Priya smiled at the baby totally smitten by
her she was a gorgeous baby and the baby seemed to be just has taken in by
Priya she gurgled and kicked her little legs stretching her arms for Priya to
carry her.Oh my Arpita said my Aditi is
totally crazy about you. Priya laughed taking
the baby into her arms she juggled her while she spoke in cute baby talk.The
two men on either side of woman looked on amused silently watching. Arpita made
the introduction Rohit this is Mr Ram Kapoor and his wife Mrs Priya Kapoor,
pointing to her husband she said and this is my husband Lieutenant Colonel
Rohit Singh of the Indian Army.Pleasure to meet you both men said shaking each other’s hands.Rohit said to Ram I’m extremely surprised at
my daughter’s behavior normally she doesn’t go to anyone but she seems completely
at ease with your wife.Ram laughed well
Priya does have her way with children.They both continued a general discussion as Ram spoke of his admiration
of the Indian Army while the female troope of Priya, Arpita and Baby Aditi
bonded a little more on motherhood.
A little while later Ram said to Priya I think it’s time we
left,Priya smiled at him and then to
Arpita she said we’ll it was a real pleasure meeting you again I have to tell
you I just simply adore this little one. Baby Aditi smiled and gurgled away
some more as she knew Priya was talking about her.Priya said Aditi it’s time for me to go
sweetheart she kissed her tiny forehead and handed her back to her mother. Aditi wailed loudly refusing to go back to her
mother, she didn’t let go of Priya grabbing on to her long tresses of hair, twisting
it around her chubby fingers. Priya
chuckled and said Aditi my angel why you crying sweetheart? See here’s your mama
and the baby howled even more ducking her head into Priya’s neck refusing to be
taken by both her parents.The passer
by’s in the foyer looked on curiously while both Rohit and Arpita were shocked
at their child’s behavior. Ram smiled seems we have a problem both parents said
we just can’t believe this. Arpita said
I’m really sorry about this Priya. No, no its ok Priya said assuringly while
Arpita held on to her babies tiny body allowing Priya to let go of her. Aditi’s shriek was piercing hitting the eardrum
it was so heart wrenching that Priya couldn’t bear to see her like this so she
said I think we’ll leave now. Rohit said I’m really so sorry about this I don’t
know what’s gotten into Aditi she’s never like this.Priya smiled it’s ok you just take care of
her they bid them farewell and walked away hearing the shrill of the babies
screech echoing through the foyer of the hotel.
Once outside both breathed a sigh of relief, oh my god Priya
said that was just horrible.Ram said
you see that’s your problem you get to attached. Priya said but I didn’t do
anything, I know you didn’t but sometimes you need to think before you
act.Priya said ok I agree I should not
have carried the baby but she was so cute I couldn’t resist.Ram shook his head what am I going to do with
you?She tilted her head and smiled
putting her arm through his she said well that’s simple you going to walk me
across to buy me my kulfi from the vendor over there.He looked at her and said you know what Mrs
Kapoor you are extremely demanding.She
eyed him and said are you complaining Mr Kapoor.He chuckled I won’t dare complain she giggled
and said well I’m glad you realize that, he mumbled under his breath cheeky
madam she said I heard that.
Marine drive was a circular bend along the Arabian sea
enclosing it into a secluded bay, here night time was alive along the promenade
with people walking along enjoying the freshness of the evening and it was here that most came to watch the sunset viewing and then stayed on late into the night. It was very common to find
lover’s walking hand in hand when you looked at them you knew romance was in the air.Priya quiet thoroughly enjoyed eating her
kulfi stick while feeding it to Ram. She wanted to be overly indulgent so she demanded for a second one
and off course the husband lovingly made sure she got it. After she was done she
hugged him and said thank you I’ve had the best time.He smiled at her and said it’s my pleasure.
While In his arms she spotted a horse drawn carriage and with an excited look she asked
him do you promise to fulfill everything that I ask of you, he touched her
cheek baby it gives me the greatest pleasure to make you happy. She clapped her
hands in excitement and said well in that case Mr Kapoor I want to go on a
carriage ride.He said well after the
baby is born we’ll go to New York together and you can have your carriage ride
in central park it’s really beautiful and I know you will enjoy it. She looked at him weirdly why would I want to go to New York for a carriage ride when I can have one right here pointing to the horse drawn carriage across them.
Ram looked at her
horrified you mean you want to go on that thing right now. Off course she said
I want to go now. Tiny drops of sweat beads
formed along his hairline you got to be joking right? I’m not joking and yes I’m very serious. But, but he stammered
no but, but clinging onto his arm she said let’s go. He was left with no
choice but to follow cursing this madam for wanting to go on that god forsaken
carriage yuck he shuddered to think how creepy it all looked. He wriggled his
nose totally put off.Priya said to him
stop being such a spoilt sport have you never been on one she asked? He shook
his head she looked at him amused you mean you’ve never been on one ever,
irritated he said no.
She laughed at him
the problem with you Ram is that you need to get out more and experience life like
normal people do.He said madam are you
done with your lecture, she giggled yes. I’m not going on that thing he said,
yes you arebecause you promised me. He
said that’s not fair you conned me into it.She pouted her lips sulking giving up she said ok have it your way and she turned to walk away. Seeing
her walk away he gritted his teeth squeezing both his hands in the air almost like
he was ready to wring her neck.He went
after her with an over the top smile under his breath he said madam your carriage awaits you. Smiling to herself she turned to look at
him so are you saying you will come with me and he said under one condition,
what she asked? He smiled devilishly I want a full body massage from you, ok done it’s a deal she stretched her hand out
and he took hers in a firm grip shaking it to close the deal. I love negotiating
with you Mrs Kapoor and she said Mr Kapoor I’ll remind you of that in the
future. He laughed swatting her backside let’s go madam and she squealed ouch
you crazy man I’m pregnant and he said funny it doesn’t stop you from having
the biggest mouth under the sun. Her jaw dropped totally exasperated by what he
said, he laughed are you coming or not?He left her as he walked off in the direction of the carriage.
The slightly breezy night had an enchanting mood with late night strollers
walking along while cars passed through the steady flow of the traffic and
different sounds echoing in all directions.It was so easy to feel the thrill of the city night right here in this horse
drawn carriage which was decked out in its daily ensemble with its colorful display
of artificial flowers and pop up balloons added to give its own uniqueness but
what the horse and its master didn’t realize seated in their carriage was Ram
& Priya Kapoor India’s richest billionaire They were sitting on faded
velvet lined cushioned seats ready to enjoy the splendors of the night as they
passed through the land mark areas for a romantic ride around.Ram had his arm around Priya’s shoulder her
head lay against him while on their laps they draped the light summery shawl
that she carried for the sometimes breezy nights.The rider turned smiling at them and asked
music? They both nodded their heads.He
off course did this run day in day out a thousand times over and could assess
immediately what sort of mood was needed and so he chose some fine bollywood love
songs as the song Haal E Dil from the movie Murder 2 played to full volume.
Priya held on to his free hand playing and twisting around
his fingers she circled his wedding band and said are you enjoying this, he
said yes I am I never realized how amazing a carriage ride in Mumbai could be
she smiled so you agree that you don’t need to go anywhere else but right here
we have something equally spectacular.He laughed I did have my doubts on the safety aspect but being here with you
right this moment is the most amazing experience. She looked up at him smiling I’m
glad you think so. He smiled back bringing her face closer to his as he kissed
her soundly I love you Mrs Kapoor. He slipped
his hand underneath the shawl and touched at the juncture in between her legs. Her
breath quickened holding on to his hand she said no Ram someone will see us
shuhhh baby trust me ok, just trust me she gave him all of her trust letting him
administer his own sense of loving on her right here in this carriage through the
layers of her clothing he found his way to her moistness touching her bare
in feathered strokes. She laid both her hands on his covering it while their
mouths clashed their tongues finding its own strokes as his fingers worked
her deep. The motion of the carriage bumping, the seductiveness of the
soundtrack and her husband’s fingers inside her, he knew when she was about to
come holding her tightly firm around the back of her neck he kissed her solid
to drown the sounds of her moans as he brought her to an explosive climax her liquid heat smeared on his fingers as he gently pulled out of her and brought his fingers to his mouth to lick off all the she gave him. She looked at him in stilled motion speechless to what they'd done right here. Words were not needed just a closeness a nearness as their heart beats quickened to the pace of horse hooves clapping along. Rearranging her clothing she rested her head back on his shoulder while she closed her eyes holding on to his arm.
A few minutes later Ram's voiced could be heard baby wake up we are here she opened her eyes to view the point of where their carriage ride began it was the end. He helped her step down guiding her footing as she gently came into his arms, hmmm he hugged her whispering in her ear if only I had realized earlier how much fun a carriage ride could be. She said well i'm glad you didn't because you would off taken your girl friends before me and I would be so jealous if you did. He laughed and said baby you never fail to amaze me come on lets go home holding her hands they walked their way to the car.
What a night it turned out to be romantic filled with passionate love . When they arrived back to their apartment they headed straight for their bedroom knowing full well how this night was going to end. Without delay they stripped themselves of their clothing climbing into bed both of them already sensitized and on fire from their earlier sexual encounters that there was no need for any foreplay all that was needed was his full hardened erection inside her and she opening up to him while they fucked in the most primitive way for a man and woman to come together. Their earth shattering noises of release reverberated in the room as their wet spillage had them in a lover's mess. They were totally exhausted but completely satisfied that they didn't even have the energy to clean the stickiness between their legs. From a full day of heightened drama to a breakaway for love they both drifted of to sleep with their eyes closed to the real world but their subconscious mind opened to a dream world.
Hi T, Thank you for the wonderful update!!! Was a great read after two long weeks. what was amazing apart from the entire update was the fact that big business deals are also made on basis of love.Have read over 100 fan fictions on BALH but this one is by far the most consistent and breathtaking till date. PLS KEEP WRITING!! LOVE MEG (BALHSUPERFAN)
We've been chatting on twitter and I didn't realize this was you well now that I know a really big hug to you. Well BALHSUPERFAN what can I say except that when I get comments like yours it totally blows my mind I feel honored having people like you appreciate my work. Never in a million years did I ever expect that simple chapter one would churn out 42 chapters later and still going strong. I am most inspired by my fans and their eagerness for the story to unfold so I also have you guys to thank for making AJR what it is today.
Please do keep posting love to hear from you as always.
How are you? great to see you around thanks for your comment and as usual being the sweetest you are for always enjoying the updates and really glad Chapter 42 was a hit.
Thanks so much babe love to hear from you again so please keep in touch when you can.
Hello T, *HUG* thanks for the update, you must have worked really hard after the vacation to bring the update just in 2 days time, hats off to you.
You posted it yesterday only and i am reading it now, late again :(
Loved the conversation between Sheikh and Ram, Ram is adorable in every sense of the word. :) Poor guy put his business at stake to please his Hitler wife :D :D
Where you can find such guys in real world, find one for me, LOL!! :D :D
Loved the longing, desire for each other. Carriage ride was awesome and the romance between two is ever growing. Crazy and cutely in love <3 <3
And i absolutely agree with MEG above, that from all the FFs on Balh so far yours is consistent, breathtaking and you never cease to amaze us by your writing.
The song choice is also good, apt for the situation :)
Yar yesterday test got cancelled, so i went to the store nearby and bought Fifty shades of Grey, i don't know i didn't like the novel. just the first 50 pages or so was good, Grey is not at all the kind of guy girls should get involved in, he is dark and twisty plus i disliked more of the Ana's character, the girl is short of any kind of self respect. What is the use of writing about her subconscious POV when she never listens to it. Huh!!!
have you read all the 3 novels, if yes please give some review if i should further read it or not. I mean i want to know what is worng with Grey to behave in such a way with the poor girl. And why he turned out to be like the way he is now.
I read the whole thing yesterday itself just in 7 to 8 hrs i think. But it was depressing novel. I wonder how it has topped i mean even surpassed harry potter. i think it's because of the porn content. I didn't find it romantic.
Hii himani .. If u read d nxt 2 parts of d novel it will clear all ur doubts regarding Christians character ... N definitely dey r better Dan d first part reagarding d romance also ... I recommend u to read d nxt 2 also if u hav read d first one didn't liked it ... Coz I too didn't like d first part because of all d things u hav mentioned in ur post ...
Thanks Payal for the information, earlier i had bought just the first part, even T recommended me to read 2nd and 3rd, i have ordered both from the flipkart and will definitely be reading it, hope will like some of it *fingers crossed*
As usual I love your input on the chapter you know the sad thing about AJR is that our RK only exists in these chapters and nothing more. Yes he's perfection in our imagination and its what we really want to see in a real life partner sadly I've not seen a real RK who was ready to risk his business for love so to tell you a secret I am also hoping one day he'd be in my horizon but for now sadly I will just create him to pass my time and yours LOL.
I'm really glad you enjoyed the scenes and how they played out and off course the choice of music I love that song so it just felt right to include it.
So yes we discussed our Grey review on twitter. Personally I was not impressed with the book I really struggled to move on in the book I just wasn't feeling the story and couldn't relate to the character but so I continued because of it's popularity and the amazing reviews it garnered. I feel the books are over-rated and this whole BDSM thing really kills any romance actually can't call it a romance novel yes it was an erotic novel but the sex was not real for me it seemed far fetched and totally beyond my imagination almost so that the red room scared the living daylights out of me LOL.
I started getting a feel of the story towards the end of the last chapters on the first book and so moved to the 2nd and 3rd books which sort of answered the missing parts and it all fell into place but I did speed read or skip some of the sex scenes I think there comes a point when you actually say really STOP if you don't have anything worth reading. If I had to rate this series i'd give it a 2.8 rating but please don't let me put you off this, everyone needs to read to formulate their own opinion.
Now I also wanted to say the only reason I actually mentioned Fifty Shades in AJR it was purely for fun because it's still a hip and happening book so I thought it would be fun to make mention of it because really every female that I know have either read it or are talking about it.
Personally in creating I am a realistic person and it's got to make sense I need to enjoy, feel and live the story so that when I read it I forget that I actually wrote it LOL my expectations are rather very high of myself and what I can offer my readers and I feel really honored when you guys appreciate what I churn out.
Now that book 2 and 3 is almost on its way to you we'll discuss further when you've read more and hope its going to be worth your read well we'll compare notes again.
Payel also wanted to mention read your comment to Himani's post and I totally agree with your POV. guess we kind of all old fashioned romance type of girls with candles, flowers, chocolates and a real gentleman with just a slight edge to him, *SIGH* will keep dreaming LOL
Hello T *hug* you are right men like RK in AJR doen't exist in real world, we can only fantasize about them :D you can always create such characters in your fiction and we can read them :D
Thanks for the detailed review on Grey.
I ordered both the parts from flipkart but unfortunately will be getting 3rd one first and second by 11 April, so i guess will have to wait further to read them.
The book must be really in demand for flipkart to take this much time in delivery otherwise they deliver just in 2 days time.
And yes we are old fashioned, i will always prefer candles and flowers over that nonsense anytime.
like you said and we discussed on twitter also the whole BSDM thing was put off, and the red room of pain scared the day lights out of me also, there was nothing remotely romantic about it. Its hard to imagine how people find it romantic. I find it sick. When i was reading the book, i kept thinking that this guy needs pysch consult and the girl need to get some self respect.
Will definitely be reading the two books to unlock Grey's character and hopefully Ana turns out to be strong with some self respect and doesn't succumb to Grey's wishes.
Have you read 11 minutes by Paulo Coelho, it is a much better read and definitely worth the money. If you have not read it you can give it a try.
Looking forward to the next part of AJR, hopefully you get some time around this weekend for the update, because i know as you are back from ur vacation u must be busy in the office with work.
I have to tell you a few months ago I was in a bookstore casually browsing through when I was totally amused hearing a conversation of 4 elderly woman +70 and over in age. Mind you they were discussing Mr Grey and his antics and how they totally loved the book and him LOL I was gobsmacked but amused and the one was saying that she had lent her book to a friend and she needed to get it back for her book club meeting.
Gosh that's how crazy it's gone when even the old birds are drooling about Grey ROFL
Anyway hopefully your next two get to you soon so you can start reading again.
Yes I've read Paulo Coelho the Alchemist but haven't got to 11 Minutes I've heard its a good book and yes I've got it down on my list when I find time.
Yes its the second day back at work and hectic days ahead but will surely try to find time to get the next chapter up and running.
Hello T *HUG* where are you darling, i guess work load is too much since you came back from ur vacation.
Missing AJR updates, its two weeks now :(
And i completed Grey Trilogy, 2nd and 3rd are far better then the 1st book, Ana's character came back strongly in these. Now after reading the whole series i can say it was not that bad as i thought it to be after reading 1st book.
I guess u get used to the idea after the 1st one, that was a shocker lol!! And the last 2 parts had little romance also barring the red playroom :D :D
And regarding old ladies drooling, on flipkart you will find mostly positive reviews, i think girls are going crazy over Mr Grey, the dark and twisty. :D
When u will be able to manage to post the next update, eagerly waiting, do msg me on twitter when u do :)
And my studies are coming along just fine, exams are coming near, just 41 days left, now i won't be much around. But still will try to find time for my fav AJR :)
OMG you done with the trilogy how in the world did you manage that with your tight study schedule well as we told you 2 & 3 was a little better and glad that the read was not all wasted.
Now i'm not sure if you heard of Sylvia Dey her book was based on a similar concept to fifty but frankly speaking i think hers was a much better read so when you done with your exams have a go at this if you can and let me know what you think. Bared to you and Reflected in you the two titles of the books.
40 days and counting wow hope your studies are coming together nicely don't want you hitting a big fat zero i expect top marks from you and nothing less hehehehehe, high expectations are set.
surely T, working day and night for clearing and hopefully will be able to meet ur expectations.
And how i was able to complete the trilogy, well i was saving time for that, i saved one day so that as soon as i get the books i can read them, i managed to complete both in same day. So it worked out for me, because there was no way that i could read in leisure time, i have no leisure time.
I have not heard of Sylvia Dey, but now that you have mentioned it will read it after my exams :)
Omg omg omg what a fabulous update T after two weeks worth a wait After reading so many parts of this ff i still think its the beggining nd have many more to come, i never got bored reading this nd everytime u amazed me with the stupendous update. Keep them coming love u Big hug to u muahhh baby
First of all a very BIG HUG to you, you an amazing champion of sorts and when you love the update it makes all the effort that go into it so worth while. Let me share a secret with you AJR is not ending anytime soon I haven't even thought that far. There is so much possibility with the story that I think if it did come to an end i'd be depressed myself.
So thank you so much for reading along and loving AJR like you do I love you even more for being apart of this journey.
Welcome and a really big hug to you. Thank you so much for posting a comment really appreciate it. Well it's awesome knowing you enjoying the storyline and great having you following AJR. Hope to hear from you again and please do pop a post whenever you have time would love to hear your views.
Hii T this update really worth the wait... As ususal fab update.... Amazing write up loved it... specially the carriage part... looking forward to the next part.... It seems like u enjoyed the holiday
Thank you so much and so happy you enjoyed this chapter always love hearing from you and off course it's a relief when the chapter passes it's test LOL, I can breathe a sigh of relief.
Yes holidays were great but my usual complaint it was too short and days flew by too quickly, and here not even on the second day back at work i'm ready for a holiday all over again LOL but sadly that ain't happening anytime soon i'm totally deskbound for a while. *Sad*
Awh so great to hear from you hope you are well and all ok on your end. That's great thanks for your comment and finding time to read and post much appreciated. I guess the carriage ride would surely be a really good memory for them LOL
awh that's just amazing thanks for sharing that with me and glad I can add a bit of sparkle to your day LOL. Would love to hear from you again and you take care. Hugs and mwahs T
Hey t when will u update the next part. It's Sunday And it's been a long one week n u haven't given the update pls update the next part I'm waiting eagrly for the next part pls update soon
awh babe sorry the next update needs some very careful thought process for me. I'm still working on it and will post once its finished been difficult finding time to work on it but i'm trying.
Hey t take all the time for the update U need so dat cmng part can be as beautiFul as previous ones and do update fast I m loving it and a big thank u for hug
T, sorry for the late comment( a lot was going on at personal level) ...thanks for another RaYalicious update. Their day together was so hot and romantic...you have a fantastic imagination my friend. If I may...as I have mentioned before that I really like Priya of AJR...could you write some scenes in which priya is the hellcat and RK is trying his best to pacify her...maybe some FB's. Since you girls are discussing 50 shades of Grey, I will give my two cents too ;) ....like you said book 2 and 3 put everything from book 1 in a better perspective. Erotic is nice but BDSM and red room made those parts very unromantic for me...I was skipping those parts more and more once I got into the actual story. Frankly speaking, AJR has the right balance of romance , possessiveness, passion and other elements that keep life spiced up like their fight over the ring and the make out session that followed ...looking forward to the next update:)
Even i'm sorry for my late reply to your post but thanks so much for finding time to comment, Firstly glad you liked chapter 42 and I'm taking your request into consideration just so you know that there is still so much to come in AJR what the future holds in terms of where the story is heading well after the next few updates you will sort have an idea of what to expect but I hope to find you here more often.
also welcome to the circle of Fifty LOL interesting our opinions are the same yup i'm proud so say i'm just a good old fashioned romance type girl who thinks BDSM has no place in the world of my type of romance so sadly fifty shades will never make my must read books again. I can never understand the craze around it but guess i'm just the plain jane boring type LOL
well the next update is posted and hope you do get a chance to read.
Hi T,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the wonderful update!!! Was a great read after two long weeks. what was amazing apart from the entire update was the fact that big business deals are also made on basis of love.Have read over 100 fan fictions on BALH but this one is by far the most consistent and breathtaking till date.
PLS KEEP WRITING!!
LOVE MEG
(BALHSUPERFAN)
OMG Meg
DeleteWe've been chatting on twitter and I didn't realize this was you well now that I know a really big hug to you. Well BALHSUPERFAN what can I say except that when I get comments like yours it totally blows my mind I feel honored having people like you appreciate my work. Never in a million years did I ever expect that simple chapter one would churn out 42 chapters later and still going strong. I am most inspired by my fans and their eagerness for the story to unfold so I also have you guys to thank for making AJR what it is today.
Please do keep posting love to hear from you as always.
Love
T
Hey
ReplyDeleteIt s wonderful loved it .... Thanks for updating after so long .. was missing ur update
Payel
Hey Payel
DeleteHow are you? great to see you around thanks for your comment and as usual being the sweetest you are for always enjoying the updates and really glad Chapter 42 was a hit.
Thanks so much babe love to hear from you again so please keep in touch when you can.
Love
T
Hello T, *HUG* thanks for the update, you must have worked really hard after the vacation to bring the update just in 2 days time, hats off to you.
ReplyDeleteYou posted it yesterday only and i am reading it now, late again :(
Loved the conversation between Sheikh and Ram, Ram is adorable in every sense of the word. :) Poor guy put his business at stake to please his Hitler wife :D :D
Where you can find such guys in real world, find one for me, LOL!! :D :D
Loved the longing, desire for each other. Carriage ride was awesome and the romance between two is ever growing. Crazy and cutely in love <3 <3
And i absolutely agree with MEG above, that from all the FFs on Balh so far yours is consistent, breathtaking and you never cease to amaze us by your writing.
The song choice is also good, apt for the situation :)
Yar yesterday test got cancelled, so i went to the store nearby and bought Fifty shades of Grey, i don't know i didn't like the novel. just the first 50 pages or so was good, Grey is not at all the kind of guy girls should get involved in, he is dark and twisty plus i disliked more of the Ana's character, the girl is short of any kind of self respect. What is the use of writing about her subconscious POV when she never listens to it. Huh!!!
have you read all the 3 novels, if yes please give some review if i should further read it or not. I mean i want to know what is worng with Grey to behave in such a way with the poor girl. And why he turned out to be like the way he is now.
I read the whole thing yesterday itself just in 7 to 8 hrs i think. But it was depressing novel. I wonder how it has topped i mean even surpassed harry potter. i think it's because of the porn content. I didn't find it romantic.
Looking forward to the next update
Love
Himani
Hii himani ..
DeleteIf u read d nxt 2 parts of d novel it will clear all ur doubts regarding Christians character ... N definitely dey r better Dan d first part reagarding d romance also ... I recommend u to read d nxt 2 also if u hav read d first one didn't liked it ... Coz I too didn't like d first part because of all d things u hav mentioned in ur post ...
Payel
Thanks Payal for the information, earlier i had bought just the first part, even T recommended me to read 2nd and 3rd, i have ordered both from the flipkart and will definitely be reading it, hope will like some of it *fingers crossed*
DeleteThanks once again :):)
Love
Himani
Hey Himani
DeleteAs usual I love your input on the chapter you know the sad thing about AJR is that our RK only exists in these chapters and nothing more. Yes he's perfection in our imagination and its what we really want to see in a real life partner sadly I've not seen a real RK who was ready to risk his business for love so to tell you a secret I am also hoping one day he'd be in my horizon but for now sadly I will just create him to pass my time and yours LOL.
I'm really glad you enjoyed the scenes and how they played out and off course the choice of music I love that song so it just felt right to include it.
So yes we discussed our Grey review on twitter. Personally I was not impressed with the book I really struggled to move on in the book I just wasn't feeling the story and couldn't relate to the character but so I continued because of it's popularity and the amazing reviews it garnered. I feel the books are over-rated and this whole BDSM thing really kills any romance actually can't call it a romance novel yes it was an erotic novel but the sex was not real for me it seemed far fetched and totally beyond my imagination almost so that the red room scared the living daylights out of me LOL.
I started getting a feel of the story towards the end of the last chapters on the first book and so moved to the 2nd and 3rd books which sort of answered the missing parts and it all fell into place but I did speed read or skip some of the sex scenes I think there comes a point when you actually say really STOP if you don't have anything worth reading. If I had to rate this series i'd give it a 2.8 rating but please don't let me put you off this, everyone needs to read to formulate their own opinion.
Now I also wanted to say the only reason I actually mentioned Fifty Shades in AJR it was purely for fun because it's still a hip and happening book so I thought it would be fun to make mention of it because really every female that I know have either read it or are talking about it.
Personally in creating I am a realistic person and it's got to make sense I need to enjoy, feel and live the story so that when I read it I forget that I actually wrote it LOL my expectations are rather very high of myself and what I can offer my readers and I feel really honored when you guys appreciate what I churn out.
Now that book 2 and 3 is almost on its way to you we'll discuss further when you've read more and hope its going to be worth your read well we'll compare notes again.
Love
T
Payel also wanted to mention read your comment to Himani's post and I totally agree with your POV. guess we kind of all old fashioned romance type of girls with candles, flowers, chocolates and a real gentleman with just a slight edge to him, *SIGH* will keep dreaming LOL
DeleteLove
T
Hello T *hug* you are right men like RK in AJR doen't exist in real world, we can only fantasize about them :D you can always create such characters in your fiction and we can read them :D
DeleteThanks for the detailed review on Grey.
I ordered both the parts from flipkart but unfortunately will be getting 3rd one first and second by 11 April, so i guess will have to wait further to read them.
The book must be really in demand for flipkart to take this much time in delivery otherwise they deliver just in 2 days time.
And yes we are old fashioned, i will always prefer candles and flowers over that nonsense anytime.
like you said and we discussed on twitter also the whole BSDM thing was put off, and the red room of pain scared the day lights out of me also, there was nothing remotely romantic about it. Its hard to imagine how people find it romantic. I find it sick. When i was reading the book, i kept thinking that this guy needs pysch consult and the girl need to get some self respect.
Will definitely be reading the two books to unlock Grey's character and hopefully Ana turns out to be strong with some self respect and doesn't succumb to Grey's wishes.
Have you read 11 minutes by Paulo Coelho, it is a much better read and definitely worth the money. If you have not read it you can give it a try.
Looking forward to the next part of AJR, hopefully you get some time around this weekend for the update, because i know as you are back from ur vacation u must be busy in the office with work.
XOXO
Himani :) :)
Hey Himani
DeleteI have to tell you a few months ago I was in a bookstore casually browsing through when I was totally amused hearing a conversation of 4 elderly woman +70 and over in age. Mind you they were discussing Mr Grey and his antics and how they totally loved the book and him LOL I was gobsmacked but amused and the one was saying that she had lent her book to a friend and she needed to get it back for her book club meeting.
Gosh that's how crazy it's gone when even the old birds are drooling about Grey ROFL
Anyway hopefully your next two get to you soon so you can start reading again.
Yes I've read Paulo Coelho the Alchemist but haven't got to 11 Minutes I've heard its a good book and yes I've got it down on my list when I find time.
Yes its the second day back at work and hectic days ahead but will surely try to find time to get the next chapter up and running.
How's this weeks round of studies coming along?
Hugs and mwahs
Love
T
Hello T *HUG* where are you darling, i guess work load is too much since you came back from ur vacation.
DeleteMissing AJR updates, its two weeks now :(
And i completed Grey Trilogy, 2nd and 3rd are far better then the 1st book, Ana's character came back strongly in these. Now after reading the whole series i can say it was not that bad as i thought it to be after reading 1st book.
I guess u get used to the idea after the 1st one, that was a shocker lol!! And the last 2 parts had little romance also barring the red playroom :D :D
And regarding old ladies drooling, on flipkart you will find mostly positive reviews, i think girls are going crazy over Mr Grey, the dark and twisty. :D
When u will be able to manage to post the next update, eagerly waiting, do msg me on twitter when u do :)
And my studies are coming along just fine, exams are coming near, just 41 days left, now i won't be much around. But still will try to find time for my fav AJR :)
Love
Himani
OMG you done with the trilogy how in the world did you manage that with your tight study schedule well as we told you 2 & 3 was a little better and glad that the read was not all wasted.
DeleteNow i'm not sure if you heard of Sylvia Dey her book was based on a similar concept to fifty but frankly speaking i think hers was a much better read so when you done with your exams have a go at this if you can and let me know what you think. Bared to you and Reflected in you the two titles of the books.
40 days and counting wow hope your studies are coming together nicely don't want you hitting a big fat zero i expect top marks from you and nothing less hehehehehe, high expectations are set.
Love
T
surely T, working day and night for clearing and hopefully will be able to meet ur expectations.
DeleteAnd how i was able to complete the trilogy, well i was saving time for that, i saved one day so that as soon as i get the books i can read them, i managed to complete both in same day. So it worked out for me, because there was no way that i could read in leisure time, i have no leisure time.
I have not heard of Sylvia Dey, but now that you have mentioned it will read it after my exams :)
Love
Himani
Omg omg omg what a fabulous update T after two weeks worth a wait
ReplyDeleteAfter reading so many parts of this ff i still think its the beggining nd have many more to come, i never got bored reading this nd everytime u amazed me with the stupendous update.
Keep them coming love u
Big hug to u muahhh baby
First of all a very BIG HUG to you, you an amazing champion of sorts and when you love the update it makes all the effort that go into it so worth while. Let me share a secret with you AJR is not ending anytime soon I haven't even thought that far. There is so much possibility with the story that I think if it did come to an end i'd be depressed myself.
DeleteSo thank you so much for reading along and loving AJR like you do I love you even more for being apart of this journey.
Mwahs
T
Thats great baby i even cant imagine this to end my sunday is incomplete without it
DeleteThank u soo much
hey t ur ff is very gud the characterisation of ram and priya in ur ff is very nice i m lovng it
ReplyDeletepls update the nxt part very soon
Hi Aanchal
DeleteWelcome and a really big hug to you. Thank you so much for posting a comment really appreciate it. Well it's awesome knowing you enjoying the storyline and great having you following AJR.
Hope to hear from you again and please do pop a post whenever you have time would love to hear your views.
I will try to update soon.
Love
T
Hii T
ReplyDeletethis update really worth the wait...
As ususal fab update....
Amazing write up
loved it...
specially the carriage part...
looking forward to the next part....
It seems like u enjoyed the holiday
Love
Fiza
Hey Babe
DeleteThank you so much and so happy you enjoyed this chapter always love hearing from you and off course it's a relief when the chapter passes it's test LOL, I can breathe a sigh of relief.
Yes holidays were great but my usual complaint it was too short and days flew by too quickly, and here not even on the second day back at work i'm ready for a holiday all over again LOL but sadly that ain't happening anytime soon i'm totally deskbound for a while. *Sad*
I hope you are ok?
Love
T
hey T sry 4 d late reply
ReplyDeletethx 4 d wonderful long update
u written very well as usual
loved carriage ride moment
waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon
Hi Sudipa
DeleteAwh so great to hear from you hope you are well and all ok on your end.
That's great thanks for your comment and finding time to read and post much appreciated.
I guess the carriage ride would surely be a really good memory for them LOL
you take care and loads of love
T
sorry for d late reply but u write just mind blowing every time it makes my day dear
ReplyDeleteawh that's just amazing thanks for sharing that with me and glad I can add a bit of sparkle to your day LOL. Would love to hear from you again and you take care.
DeleteHugs and mwahs
T
Hey t when will u update the next part. It's Sunday
ReplyDeleteAnd it's been a long one week n u haven't given the update pls update the next part I'm waiting eagrly for the next part pls update soon
awh babe sorry the next update needs some very careful thought process for me. I'm still working on it and will post once its finished been difficult finding time to work on it but i'm trying.
Deletehang in there and a big hug to you.
mwahs
T
Hey t take all the time for the update U need so dat cmng part can be as beautiFul as previous ones and do update fast I m loving it and a big thank u for hug
Deleteyour are just too sweet
Deletethank you
Mwah
T
T, sorry for the late comment( a lot was going on at personal level) ...thanks for another RaYalicious update. Their day together was so hot and romantic...you have a fantastic imagination my friend. If I may...as I have mentioned before that I really like Priya of AJR...could you write some scenes in which priya is the hellcat and RK is trying his best to pacify her...maybe some FB's. Since you girls are discussing 50 shades of Grey, I will give my two cents too ;) ....like you said book 2 and 3 put everything from book 1 in a better perspective. Erotic is nice but BDSM and red room made those parts very unromantic for me...I was skipping those parts more and more once I got into the actual story. Frankly speaking, AJR has the right balance of romance , possessiveness, passion and other elements that keep life spiced up like their fight over the ring and the make out session that followed ...looking forward to the next update:)
ReplyDeleteHi Indu
DeleteEven i'm sorry for my late reply to your post but thanks so much for finding time to comment,
Firstly glad you liked chapter 42 and I'm taking your request into consideration just so you know that there is still so much to come in AJR what the future holds in terms of where the story is heading well after the next few updates you will sort have an idea of what to expect but I hope to find you here more often.
also welcome to the circle of Fifty LOL interesting our opinions are the same yup i'm proud so say i'm just a good old fashioned romance type girl who thinks BDSM has no place in the world of my type of romance so sadly fifty shades will never make my must read books again. I can never understand the craze around it but guess i'm just the plain jane boring type LOL
well the next update is posted and hope you do get a chance to read.
Hugs and mwahs
T
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