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Sunday, 14 April 2013

Fan Fiction: A Jealous Rage! Chapter Forty Three

 
 
 
 
O Saiyyaan!
 
Chapter Forty Three 
 
From a full day of heightened drama to a breakaway for love they both drifted off to sleep with their eyes closed to the real world but their subconscious mind opened to a dream world………. 
When did dreams begin or when did it end? Did it become you or did it become one? Did it take you on your journey, or did it stop at mid point. Questions and answers all seemed to be a testing block in life but when life was beautiful who needed questions who needed answers? All that’s needed is love and love alone. Friday morning was here doing its weekly rounds, today Friday wanted it to be Thursday  again when life was care free, when life was beyond imagination,  when life was filled just in love and only love for the greatest test of a man’s will in love became a perfection that was made for dreams. How blessed where we, how blessed where they and how would this Friday unfold?  
 
 
Dreams & Love
               

This day break saw the calming waters of the Arabian sea rolling its waves, gently crashing and breaking its surf on the coast of the Mumbai shoreline while beyond, the light blue sky was kissed by the sunrise over the ocean, spreading beautifully bright as Friday was here to seal its day in a restless energy that couldn’t be identified. Strange we never have a guarantee of our nights and our days for it’s beyond a human element that's set by a higher power, knowing our truth, knowing our ultimate destiny.  Within our  expectations of dreams, there is an expect of uncertainty woven in between them but we live in our hope, we live in our love, we live for ourselves or we live for each other. However we choose to live what matters, when tomorrow comes let yesterday be a reminder that life is precious, so embrace Friday with courage and confidence, charge ahead boldly and let tomorrow just be tomorrow.

Priya was underneath the soft layers of the cover lying on her side facing her sleeping prince, gone were the days of the lion right now he could only ever be her prince charming.  She lay here in her nakedness, the sweet tenderness glowing on her body as her thoughts re-winded to just a few hours earlier when she was thoroughly loved by him.  She smiled to herself, touching his bare arm with her finger tip she drew imaginary circles while he was peacefully asleep.  Placing both her hands on his shoulder she rested her chin on them silently watching the rise and fall of his breathing, his pulse beating against her palm. She loved him beyond any imaginable dream he was her very life, her soul.  Taking in all that she saw of him she got lost in transition of thoughts with her flash-backs down memory lane passing through her vision of her love, o saiyyaan.

Meri adhoori kahaani
Lo daastaan bann gayi
Ho Tune chhuaa aaj aise
Main kya se kya ban gaya

My incomplete story,
has finally become a story..
You touched me today such that
what i have become


In Ram’s deep sleep he was aroused by the gentleness on him feeling the light weight upon his shoulder he opened his eyes to a beautiful smile that touched him as she gazed lovingly at him, good morning she said, hmmmm good morning he pulled her closer to him while she rested her head against his shoulder lying there completely relaxed. She said to him it’s time to wake up, hmmmm do we have too he asked, yes we do she said. But I just want to lie here with you snuggling in closer to her can’t we please he begged like a little child so that he could sleep some more. Finally she said ok you can sleep for a little while longer while I go have a shower he didn’t want to let go of her. She said Ram we can’t stay here like this, why ever not he asked?  Because it’s a work day for you and I’ve got things to do too. What things he asked, well for starters I have to go hand in my letter of resignation today then I have to go home to help ma with all the engagement preparations so it’s going to be a busy day in fact I think I will only be at peace once the engagement is over.

Baby I don’t want you doing anything for the engagement the others can take care of everything.  She lifted her head to look at him, how can you say that, you know Apeksha is like my own sister how can I not be there for her.  Priya it’s not that, then what is it she asked.  Well you can't over work yourself you carrying our baby.  Ram I’m pregnant I’m not disabled I know that he mumbled it’s just that, it’s just what she asked?  I don’t want you stressed besides I know my sisters I know how demanding they are.  I see is that all you can come up with, what do you mean he asked, because my dear husband I know you like I know myself you got something else on your mind.  Feeling caught out he said ok I admit I don’t want you doing anything because you will get so busy you won’t have time for me. She laughed how can I not have time for you, she asked?  Ram said because and he kept quiet, because what she demanded to know, well you know how you woman are you’ll always get so crazy when it comes to planning anything that you forget about everything else?  She laughed this is not anything it’s about your sister’s life anyway you clearly lost your mind so go back to sleep I’m going into the bathroom.  She withdrew from him getting off the bed.  Priya I’m serious, she turned in her full nakedness to look at him and said while you sleeping try and get a bit of a reality check, she flipped her hair walking off towards the dressing room  leading to the en-suite bathroom.  Watching her till she disappeared he smiled to himself closing his eyes thinking his hellcat was damn cute. God he loved her so much and wanted every moment of hers to belong only to him, yes he was a selfish man for her time because it was his to rule.  Life was falling perfectly into place, life was beautiful it was indeed beautiful. 

Sehme huey sapne mere haule-haule angdaiyaan le rahe
Thehre huey lamhe mere nayi-nayi gehraiyaan le rahe
Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane

My afraid dreams are slowly stretching..
My stopped moments are taking new depths..
My life is wearing a smile,
and I don’t know why it’s showing so much grace..
 

She came back out into the room wearing a cream satin robe, her wet hair wrapped under a towel in a turban style. She walked across to the disheveled king size bed picking up part of the bedding lying on the floor moving across she sat on the side of the bed were her lion prince lay with his eyes closed but consciously awake.  She moved closer to his ear and nipped him on his earlobe, his eyes flew opened to find his wife grinning over him time to wake up sleepy head. Gosh do you want to kill me, off course not she said I want to feed you so get up and go get ready while I go make us breakfast, hmmmm a woman straight after my own heart.  Pouting she said I thought I already had your heart? He laughed baby like you would not imagine, running her fingers through his hair she said well I’m glad to hear that. Observing his slightly overgrown hair she said Ram I think you need a haircut, yes I know I just haven’t had time but I will try to go in this afternoon to have it cut, happy he asked?  Ok she grinned now I’m going to the kitchen your baby is starving.  Which baby would that be, my big baby or small baby?  both off course she leaned forward pinching  his cheek, now get up lazy boy. Ouch that hurts, I know it does she said cheekily roughing up his hair get up and go have your shower she got up to leave. Hell cat he mumbled under his breath, she turned around and said I heard that and just for that you can type out my resignation letter.  Make it worth my while he suggested and she said not on your life Mr Kapoor now get moving or I’m going to eat breakfast without you.

Priya was in the kitchen busy preparing breakfast when Ram went up against her wrapping his arms around her, his hand sliding over her stomach as he nuzzled her neck. Dropping the spatula from her hand she turned around within his arm while he moved her right back against the counter top he loosened the belt of her robe beneath her eyes she watched both his hands clasp her naked breast, feeling his soft touch gently massaging her she gasped placing both her palms flat on his pristine white shirt she pushed him gently away while lifting his tie she twirled it around her finger seductively she said, my resignation letter awaits you my dear husband.  He laughed you are such a spoilsport, I know she said now go I’m almost done with breakfast, ok madam I’m at your service walking off to type her resignation letter. She gave a cheeky laugh while she continued flipping over  aloo paratha.

She laid out the breakfast nook with her spread that she prepared, just in time Ram came back with a letter and pen in hand madam your signature please, off course she said signing her name officially on the letter. Are you not going to read it he asked? Whatever for she asked, well what if you don’t like what’s written on it. Looking at him she said I trust you completely now lets eat breakfast I’m starving, together they both enjoyed the sumptuous meal Ram loved his wife’s cooking she always prepared the most delicious meals for him that he was most times spoilt for choice, he ate every morsel on his plate.  He was a big hearty man who loved life to the fullest and loved it even more because of his wife.   After breakfast Priya dabbed her mouth with her table napkin and said it’s getting late I’m going to clear this up and go get ready I’ll be done in half an hour.  Ok he said I’m going to make a few calls.  Priya had just completed stacking up the dishwasher and was rinsing out her hand when she heard Ram shout out her name, closing the tap she went to investigate what was wrong, she found him in the lounge. She stood at the door way and asked him why you shouting?  Look he said, look what you’ve done, she  tried to hide her smile. What did I do she asked innocently? Pointing to his shirt he said you’ve messed up my shirt with your hands, with her left hand she covered her mouth pretending to be shocked, Oh did I really do that well then I guess I just have to help you dress all over again.  She bit into her lower lip her eyes be-witching him as he stood looking at her dumbstruck.  She turned like a seductress and walked off, swaying her hips to emphasize her nakedness underneath her robe while he just followed her like an obedient puppy drooling up the curved stairway and into their bedroom.

When they entered the room his smugness returned with his senses back, he asked her so you going to help me change my shirt? She turned to face him, off course I am. Going to him she casually unknotted his tie dropping it to the floor while she concentrated on opening out his shirt buttons. Why do I feel like you deliberately set me up? Who me she asked innocently, off course you who else but you.  She grinned are you complaining Mr Kapoor? He looked at her, no I’m not complaining. He pulled her against him her mouth landing right on his male nipple, taking advantage of the situation she slid her tongue over it pulling it gently into her mouth while she sucked hard on it, he gasped for air, aren’t we getting late he asked? With her eyes sparkling in mischief she turned to walk away. He grabbed her hand yanking her back to him.  No you don’t, enough I’m going to show you what happens to naughty girls like you. She giggled, wiggling out of his embrace but he held her tight lifting her up in his arms he brought her to the un-made bed.  Unknotting the belt of her robe he opened it finding her completely naked, eyeing her he removed her turban style towel from her head leaving the damp tresses of her hair spilled against the pillow. He removed his clothing and came back to the bed totally naked himself.  Her eyes turned to the bedside table eyeing the clock the time 9.30am, he followed her view and grabbed the clock flinging it across the room. Are you crazy she asked him horrified, yes he said I’m crazy, I’m crazy for you dropping his mouth to hers I’m crazy only for you. His tongue slipped into her mouth as they moved their lips into a deep kiss that set their heart beats stimulating the sensations passing through their bodies.

I want you so badly he whispered, I need you baby so much he moved between her legs taking her on a pleasurable journey as he licked into her erogenous zones bringing her to a point of almost release but withdrawing in time. He went back up whispering into her mouth, are you my naughty girl? she nodded her head desperately wanting to be filled by him their tongues moved within their own space, kissing each other senseless while his hardened length rubbed against her clitoris sensitizing their most intimate parts. She held on to him tightly as he slipped his penis inside of the slick wetness of her vagina, the narrow passage opening up for its sole owner, its master of all as he pushed himself into the gates of heaven fucking and mating with her until their milked spillage brought them to a release that was satisfyingly satiated in love.

Odhu teri kaaya
Solah sigaar main saja loon
Sangam ki ye raina isme tyonhar main mana loom
Khushboo teri choo ke kastoori main ho jaaun
Kitni pheeki thi main sindoori main ho jaaun
Sur se zara behki huyi meri duniya thi badi be-suri
Sur mein tere dhalne lagi
Bani re piya main bani baansuri
Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane
 

I will wear your body,
i will beautify my self with sixteen adornments
this moment of meeting, I will celebrate a festival in this..
just by touching your fragrance,i will turn into musk
how pale I was,  I will become vermillion,
a little diverted from right notes,how inharmonical my world was..
I started molding to your tune,
o love I become a flute,
 

An hour later from all that loving they dressed for the day.  As promised Priya helped her burly lion I mean her charming prince  get dressed. She picked out a shirt for him helping him slip it on, off course he took the easy way out by letting her do everything for him buttoning up, to knotting his tie he loved every moment of it.  After adjusting his tie into a perfect knot she said I think you can take care of the rest , he said and just when I was having so much fun. You Mr Kapoor are totally spoilt and he said why blame me when you the reason I’m spoilt putting on his coat he said but I love when you spoil me and he winked at her. She grinned at him adjusting the pleat on her sari, I’m ready she said. He looked at her strangely are you done? yes she said I’m done and was just about to leave the dressing room when he caught her hand, she turned to look back at him, you take one step out of here dressed like that and I swear you going to be in serious trouble. Looking confused she said now what’s wrong? Look at yourself he said, she looked into the mirror finding herself appropriately dressed in a red self embossed sari perfectly covering her in all the right places so what was the problem still looking confused, Ram I can’t find anything wrong you wasting time now let’s just go please.  I’m wasting time he repeated wait he said and went to the dresser coming back to her he backed her up against the wall holding her neck lightly Don’t ever leave my sight without wearing this, placing his thumb on her forehead he touched sindoor along her middle path and dropped a tender kiss on her forehead now you are ready to leave.   She was speechless touching his arm I’m sorry Ram I didn’t mean to,  you know I’ve never gone a day without wearing sindoor and he said you’ll never have the opportunity to not wear your sindoor that is non –negotiable Mrs Kapoor you are mine and the world must know it. Have I ever disputed that Mr Kapoor, looking into her eyes he said no you just need to remember you are mine. Just like you are mine, she asked?  Their points of ownership were clear, no negotiation was required.

 A little while later he drove her to her last day at her college bringing the car to a stop he said, I hope you planning to be home early, off course I am. Ok then, take good care of my baby. She laughed so are we back to your baby, my baby.  He smiled charmingly and said take care of our baby. She looked down at her bulge, lifting her head she turned to look at him with my life I will take care of our baby with my life she whispered.  When she spoke those words its meaning punched him in full force right in his chest. For a few seconds there was silence while absorbing the intensity of her words, he leaned  forward  gripping her chin between his thumb and forefinger bringing her face right against his he said, your life is mine, its mine to keep don’t you ever forget it.  There was something deeply moving that passed between them to lighten the moment she held onto his hand and said I hope you remember that when you fight with me. Why is it always my fault he asked? with her hand on the door handle and ready to bolt she said because you the only one that's always wrong.  With his killer smile he said and when I’m inside you do I get it wrong?

 Giggling she said, you are sinful and she got out the car.  Playfully threatening he said I’ll remember that tonight.  She shut the door drowning the tail end of what he was saying. He chuckled to himself, hellcat.  Still watching her through the windscreen he started up the ignition when his phone rang, about to answer the call his eye caught the white sealed envelope which had her resignation letter in it. Switching off the ignition he got out the car, Priya was about to climb the first step up to the entrance of the college building when she was bumped rather harshly by a student. It knocked the breath out of her, she grabbed onto the railing to stop herself from falling.  The careless student in his well worn denims wearing a bright yellow t-shirt and an army printed jacket walked off not bothering to help her.

 At the speed of lightening Ram was at her side supporting her up, Baby are you ok, are you hurt?  She was shocked at the impact of almost falling, she knew how hyper Ram would be, relax she said I’m fine. Don’t tell me to relax he said you are not fine I’m going to get that fucking bastard and wring his bloody neck, how dare he bump into you like that.  Touching his arm Priya said please Ram leave it I’m fine you know how these youngsters are, they always seem to be rushing around It was a mistake. A mistake Ram said, like hell it was a mistake it looked like he knew what he was doing, you pregnant for god sake?  Ram you always make things so much more dramatic than it really is there is nothing to worry about I’m ok.   Ram was still not happy and said come on let’s go, she asked where too?  Lifting the envelope in his hand he said let’s go hand this blasted thing in and then I’m taking you home I don’t want you here for a second longer.   Stopping him by holding onto his hand she said Ram please listen to me you have to stop controlling everything around you and me, this is my job please don’t treat me like a child I have a duty to this college and I will do this on my own I promise you once I’ve said all my official goodbyes I will go home like you want me to but for now please I need to do this alone besides today is my last day here she said eagerly so that he would ease up on her.

It was tough for Ram to let go his senses telling him this is not right he needed to take her away right this minute. Shaking his head he said I’m sorry I can’t do this I can’t leave you here.  Still trying to reason with her control freak husband she said ok Ram I know you hate the idea of me being here and after today you never need to think about it because I’ve given it all up for you so the quicker you let me go, the sooner I can be home, she bit into her lower lip and said waiting for you.  Damn she always knew how to get to him. After a few seconds of silence he said if you are naked and waiting for me then I might re-consider.  She seductively asked well if you want me waiting for you naked should I wait for you in our apartment. Fantasizing the idea a huge grin passed on his face going closer for her ears only he said, the idea of you naked and waiting for me baby is most intriguing.  She laughed well then we should not delay, let me go in and do what I need to and you go to your Kapoor Industries and earn lots of money so that you can take me on many more carriage rides, she winked at him.

He laughed sometimes I think you are the biggest tease, only sometimes she asked their eyes were playful. Can I kiss you, he asked?  She looked around and remembered they were outside in full view having an explicit conversation god Ram you are just too much, no you can’t kiss me we standing outside the college. Then how about just a little peck Ram stop it, she laughed pushing him just go please. Grabbing hold of her hand he brought her close I can be a patient man within reason but when we are alone  you will have to make up for all of that we missing right this moment.  Laughing  well off course I will she whispered I will be ready and waiting for you now please just go she grabbed the white envelope from him. Taking a deep exhaled breath, ok he said looking at her intently I’m going he turned slowly to walk away.

Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai
Aankh num kyun naa jaane
O Saiyyan…

my life is wearing a smile,
and I don’t know why its showing so much grace..
my wishes have started twisting n turning but-
don’t know why, my eyes are still wet..
O my love..

Priya called out to him, he turned to see her smiling face blowing him a kiss, eagerly he grabbed it with his right hand bringing it to his lips as he watched her lips move I love you, the words reaching out to his heart.  He smiled walking to the car while she walked entering the domain of the college. Her phone vibrated with an incoming message she opened it to read, I love you too baby and the sweetest smile crossed her face. Good morning mam, good morning she greeted as she passed through the passage on her way to the principal’s office.

As the day progressed the news desk at NDTV became a buzz of activity, currently on air Barkha Dutt a senior news editor talked to a panel which included the minister of education. The minister responded to her cutting edge questioning Barkha lets not focus on the past, lets concentrate on our plans ahead. How can you say that sir when that very past is still affecting us to this present day. Look Barkha the government is working on strategies to ensure that every girl child is given that opportunity to go to school and decide for herself what she should do, but why only now sir where was the government all this time. I can’t answer for my predecessors Barkha but I can assure you that this present government is committed towards our course and that within the next 5 years I expect that we would have achieved our targets. Ok sir tell me what are… her producer signaled to her, speaking into her ear piece Bharka move to the bottom of the screen right now, news just in.  Being continuously put on the spot she was so well trained for whatever was coming up so she continued to complete her question to the minister, what are the strategies you have planned? looking straight ahead to the camera she said and we will hear more from the minister shortly but for now we have breaking news that’s just come in so let’s cross over to our news desk.  

Natasha Kapoor was on edge rubbing her tired eyes, she tried to concentrate on her sketch feeling like it was one big mess. Ripping through the sheet she threw it in her frustration, her office floor was a serious victim to her rumbled screwed up balls of paper.  She gave up, holding her head trying to massage her temples, I can’t do this she said, I just can’t. Talking to herself, what is wrong Karthik why are you behaving like this, for god-sake speak to me,   what is it that’s bothering you so much, she self questioned and questioned herself.  From the previous night Karthik was deeply troubled he was barely sleeping or eating and Natasha couldn’t put her finger on it. In fact she couldn’t seem to do anything to help him and that’s the reason she was so worked up right now. Trying to distract her wavering thoughts she switched on her flat screen TV, flipping irritated through the channels she came to a complete dead stop the remote control dropped from her hand crashing loudly against the highly polished wooden flooring. Her eyes focused on NDTV news flashing, breaking news. She could barely breathe, Oh my god, oh my god she cried her hands shaking so badly that she had to hold on to her desk for support.  Outside her assistant heard the crash on the floor and came rushing into the office Nutz are you ok she looked at her worriedly, all Nutz was doing was crying looking at the screen, her right hand fisted against her mouth as she tried to drown the sounds of her deep cries, please call Karthik for me she begged her assistant, please I need Karthik, oh my god please I need Karthik she screamed I just need Karthik she broke down sobbing?   Her assistant said Nutz calm down, just please you need to calm down, she dialed Karthik’s number immediately it went to voicemail, she tried dialing once again a female toned operator robotically spoke, the subscriber you have reached is currently unavailable please try again later.

Inside her room of the Four Seasons hotel Arpita Singh was trying desperately to soothe baby Aditi since last night Aditi barely slept crying the night away.  Arpita couldn’t understand what could be wrong she checked her temperature it was normal, she wasn’t even teething so she knew it wasn’t a discomfort in her gums but maybe she should just take her to see a doctor but they didn’t know anyone that they could trust here in Mumbai. Anyway they were leaving tomorrow as soon as she got to Delhi she was heading straight to her pediatrician or maybe she should just call her now, maybe she could get some advise still restless she continued to walk the length of the room tapping and bouncing the baby girl lightly in her arms weighing up her options. She picked up the remote control to look for the cartoon network. Flipping through the channels she passed through the news channels and then skipped back too  NDTV news, she froze in shocked stillness trying to absorb what was happening, grabbing her phone she dialed her husband. He answered within three rings, hearing his wife’s crying voice  Rohit, Arpita what is it, hearing the baby crying in the background Arpita for god-sake what’s wrong, is something wrong with Aditi? Rohit, she couldn’t even talk, Arpita please what’s going on? It left a very confused looking Lieutenant Colonel Rohit Singh speaking to his wife he was here in Mumbai as part of a task team to strategically plan the security detail around the US presidential visit to India.  Right now he was somewhat taken aback listening to his wife, ok Arpita just please I need you to stay calm, I will look into it just don’t go anywhere I will call you as soon as I know more.

Ram Kapoor was in a meeting addressing his project team on the Dubai purchase. Vikram was also in attendance listening in, his phone rang incoming caller ID Neha, ignoring it he cut the call apologizing for the disturbance. Ram looked at him and continued talking. Outside walking down the passage Jenny could see through the glass window of the break room people hanging around glued to the TV screen, highly intrigued she popped in and said hey guys what’s going on.

Back in the boardroom Vikram’s phone rang once again this time Ram told him just answer the call. Vikram excused himself picking up the call he whispered Neha I’m in a meeting I’ll call you back, Vikram she screamed hysterically, Neha what’s gotten into you, looking around the room embarrassed he gritted his teeth and smiled Neha I’ll speak to you later. Vikram she cried please, please switch on the news, what he asked? Pleaseeee gulping her breath in her shocked state, switch on the news right now she cried.

 Ram could clearly overhear a distraught Neha, he looked at Vikram weirdly what’s going on he asked? Vikram shook his head mouthing I don’t know while he turned to grab the remote to switch on the flat screen skipping to the news channel, at the same time the boardroom door flew open and Jenny came charging into it stunning everyone with her pale ashen color on her face looking like she’d seen a ghost. Ram looked at her surprised he was about to ask her what was going on, when the news channel came on and everyone's attention turned to view.  Within Kapoor industries telephone and cellular phones were ringing the loud tones coming in from all directions, inside this boardroom amidst the noise there was stunned silence of disbelief then all that was heard, was a loud crash bang from the speed that Ram Kapoor woke up of his chair, it rolled back hitting into a side table.  Placing both of his hands on the huge table his ring came outstandingly into focus.  Somebody please tell me what the hell is going on, he demanded.  His eyes not leaving the TV screen as shock shook through his body catching the headlines flashing across the screen, Hostage Crisis.  He was trying to understand the tail end of what the field reporter was saying she was standing amongst the crowd speaking into her microphone but his ears blocked out the voice his mind not registering the impact of what she was saying but his body went numb.  The screen shifted to live visuals of a roof top building seen from a distance the back of a man holding someone around the neck with a gun pointed to the head, the assailant turned around and the hostage came to clear view. Jesus Christ they shouted running at the speed of lightening they ran for dear life while the floors surface echoed out the sounds of running feet as news spread like wildfire through the rest of Kapoor industries everyone was deeply shocked and concerned by what was happening.

 I said shut the fuck up or I’m going to blow your brains out.  She cried please don’t do this I beg of you she cried, listen bitch I’m going to fucking kill you right now if you don’t shut the fuck up. His nervous eye watching the police sharp shooters stand back he screamed, stand back or I will fucking kill her he tightened the hold on her throat stabbing the gun to her head.  She held on his hand begging him to loosen his grip her throat choking. My baby she begged hoarsely please don’t harm me, my baby please she cried.  You rich bitch sniggering at her you think I’m concerned about that little brat of yours, if you dead the world as one less rich brat to deal with he laughed harshly so fucking shut your mouth, you hear me bitch shut it he yelled in her ear laughing like a devil incarnate while her hand quickly dropped to her stomach protecting her baby from this evilness.

The hostage crisis at St Marks College had Priya Kapoor held hostage by a crazy drug addicted student, news channels around the country were all in the midst of the crisis developing, above in the sky the NDTV news helicopter circled the area bringing in live visual footage from the rooftop of the high rise building.   Below emergency services barricaded the area for a police crime scene backing off the huge crowds that formed.  Ram Kapoor arrived in a state trying to get past the crowds, the news reporters and the police departments in full force.  I need to get to my wife he shouted get out of my way he pushed through not caring for anything or anyone he just needed to reach the rooftop, get out of my way. Vikram yelled can you people please just get out of the damn way,  coming up to the barricade they were blocked by the police,  sir back off you can’t go in there the policeman shouted at Ram.  Ram pushed him aside he flew like a lightweight landing flat on his butt while more policeman came running to block Ram from a destructive path, stop they shouted you can't go in there. Just you dare try and stop me he threated, that’s my wife up there you bloody fools get out of my way right now or there will be hell to pay for he shouted pushing past them.

A single gunshot ripped through the air on the roof top, the deafening sound echoed it’s self as chaos spread above and below. The sickening sound of the gunshot shuddered through Ram’s body as he screamed Priyaaaaaaaaaaa, noooooooooo he ran for dear life.  Vikram charged ahead in full speed as they both raced to get to the top of building while a second gunshot fired and more screams could be heard. They both were paralyzed in a horrible state of shock.  Ram shaking with the dread of fear, what was he going to find up there, oh my god Vikram not Priya he cried please god nooooo he choked out sobs ,I would die if anything happened to her Vikram please god no.  For the first time in his life Vikram couldn’t even speak of being positive for the dread of fear was too much to bear as tears rolled down his cheeks knowing the horrible state they were in.  They got to the trap door opening that led to the roof top and it was blocked by more police, My wife Ram screamed, my wife for god-sake my wife he cried, trying to get past.

Mere aasmaan se jo hamesha gumshuda thay
Chaand taare tune garrdishon ki lay badal di
Laut aaye aaj saare…

from my sky those who were always missing
the moon and stars,you changed the tune of haze
and they all came back today..

O Saiyyan…

O my love…
 
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23 comments:

  1. Wow wow wow ... What an update T .... Just mind blowing ... From d starting till d end ... I mean all d love all d tease d possesiveness or shud I say ownership issue ... Morning love making ... N den d suspense in the end .... Just fabulous just terrific ... Loved it ... N u ended it at such a point just keeping us all hanging at the cliff .. now we have to wait for two more weeks to get d nxt update .......

    Payel

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    1. Hey Payel

      I'm going to confess that I deliberately delayed the update purely because I was a bit nervous of the reaction from all of you. I can not tell you how many times I wrote and re-wrote but in the end i'm glad you loved it I will surely try to update on sunday, fingers crossed and always thanks for your support really means so much to me.

      Love
      T

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  2. Hats off...drum roll...
    Panick attack on my side...how am I going to survive till ur next update...

    Eagerly awaiting for the story to unfold...

    Al

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    1. Hey Al

      I'm sending your huge BIG RAMWALA HUG, yup you will survive because I need you here LOL

      Thanks for posting.

      Love
      T

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  3. T, what a update,(two claps for that) loved it fully, it was worth waiting, took my breath away, you have penned all the emotions so well.

    Let me start from the beginning, the starting with the explanation of Dreams and Love is done so beautifully.

    The song i have already told you is one of my fav, and is apt here.

    The caring and adorable Ram, ohhh i so much love this side of him.

    And now with the hostage thing and Priya earlier not listening to him when he wanted to wring the neck of that reckless guy, i know he is going to be hysterical.

    I hope Priya is fine and nothing happens to her, it will be real pain to see Ram if anything happens to her. I dont like sad golu.

    And you have again built up the whole suspense like always, and left us hanging in the middle, please now dont take long break and update the next part as quickly as possible :)

    Love
    Himani

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    1. Hey babe

      i'm bowing down graciously accepting the applause, mwah

      thank you for that but i'm probably going to need a strong doze of alcohol to get through the next update LOL. ok i'm not thinking, really i'm not i'm just going to go hide in a corner and hope and pray it all falls into place.

      don't worry I will aim to post on Sunday I know that feeling of longing so promise will try my best.

      PS, I did post the video link at the bottom of the page hope you managed to view it again

      Hugs and mwahs
      T

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    2. T, no need to hide in the corner, i am pretty sure you can work it out in ur brain, how things are going to go forward.

      I must add that the update is breathtaking, infact in the series your best update so far, your effort had definitely paid here and you can see that from the comments above and below me :)

      You have penned the scenes with so much finesse that you can actually imagine the thing happening in real and the emotions people are going through. Well done :) :)

      And yes i managed to view the VM again :)

      Love
      Himani

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    3. LOL sorry i'm only replying now after chapter 44 was posted hence my reason to hide in a corner.

      glad the VM link worked.

      Mwah
      T

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  4. hey t
    the update was mindblowing the mrng romance of ram and priya was really cute
    ram don't want priya to go alone to clg but priya manage to convience him now priya in danger and u have end the part at a crucious point
    i m wondering wat will come next
    pls update soon
    don't make ur readers to wait for ur ff
    waiting for next part

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    1. hey Aanchal

      tonight i'm seriously celebrating the amazing responses to this update here and on twitter, wow you guys never fail to impress me with your Love for the updates and the story thanks for posting and so glad you loved it too.

      yes we in for some interesting days ahead so stay glued you don't want to miss out.

      I am trying for an early update.

      Hugs and mwahs
      T

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  5. Hi T....You know my mom always told me good things come to people who wait, she was so wrong....EXCELLENT things come to people who wait!!!!
    What an update!!!!!two weeks and this is what we get.WOW!! I always tell you your updates make my Monday but this one just made my week.totally blew my mind. Sorry I am replying after almost 12 hours and post my first read but was speechless so wanted to compose myself before I start wrote something you could not understand.
    Start till end was gripping crisp and mind boggling. The entire day I was only thinking what will happen to Priya??? No kidding had to pop two disprin as soon as I got home from work;)how are we to survive till next week??
    Loved their conversation in the car..One of my favorite moment of any RaYa FF.So deep and touching. Wonder how many of us do actually get to experience this kind of love and compassion with our partners.After reading stuff like this its so difficult to sit thru an arranged marriage meeting set up by parents or family ;) People like you help raise our expectations sky high (with your character sketch)and we fall flat on our face when the boy ends up asking if I know how to cook..uugh!!!!;(((
    I have full faith in you and your words and hope that all is going to be well with priya. But seriously this wait is going to be a torture.I hope the next one is not going to be after such a long wait.Have some pity on us please....................

    Love Meg

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    1. Hi Meg

      Now after reading your post I think I'm going to need 12 hours to post a reply LOL. where do I start what do I say accept AJR has literally taken over my life, its become part of my very existence and together with this blog its my pride and joy because both started from nothing and it was only through the love and support of the fan base that I had the courage and determination to carry this story forward and make this fan fiction what it is today.

      I write not for myself I write for you guys and when you can experience the same emotions that I do in penning the words it means the world to me so thank you for sharing such a deep moving post.

      Meg its because of our high expectations of what love and marriage should be that our choices become limited therefore I pour my energies into creating a RK that we girls can at least dream about because in this life I swear they all must be dead LOL.

      And the next time a guy asks you do you know how to cook well tell him, yes I do know how to cook but sadly i'm allergic to the kitchen LOL well that's my line and i'm sticking to it.

      now I have to say i had a good laugh that you actually had to pop two disprin this has got to be the first, mind you AJR fans never stop amazing me well I promise am trying for an early update.

      Thanks for your lovely comment and taking time out to appreciate the update trust me it means so much to me.

      Hugs and mwahs

      Love
      T

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    2. You know before reading your reply to my comment I just couldn't help but re read this update and found one more reason as to why I am so emotionally attached to this particular story...and the reason is that your fiction is so real and believable. The conversation between them about Ram's haircut was completely overlooked by me the first time I read it. But now I understand that's what makes it real and believable. Exactly the kind of topics couples bring up just out of nowhere in between their teasing or arguments.
      Well I completely agree with you about keeping the faith going in our heart through ideas and imagination like this as there seems to be no one so far in sight who can fill in the shoes of the RK ;)
      And well I am allergic to a lot more things other than cooking but that's for later...Write soon:)))

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    3. apologies i'm only replying now to your post been extremely hectic and here I am trying to catch up.

      Yes real and believable that's exactly what I always aim for in AJR and i'm chuffed that it does have that real impact on the readers, thanks for sharing.

      Mwah
      T

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  7. nice update u written very well looking frwd d nxt pls continue soon hope every thing will bw fine. thx a lot

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    1. thank you so much and hope you do like the next update too.

      Mwah
      T

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  8. Hey T

    First of all sorry for late rply i m out of town so couldnt make it.

    Coming to update, Hats off to u it was a mindblowing update totally worth a wait. I dont have words to describe their love for each other, their teasing, passionate love making in mrng, possessiveness, their convo on who owns who lol nd at last the suspence...last part took my breath away ram's reaction nd overall suspence what if anything happened to her...*claps claps*

    This is not fair u have stopped at a point leaving us hanging at cliff now plz try to update soon.

    I cant watch the video plz can u give any other link i also want to see plz.

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    1. Awh no sorry between us I really appreciate the time that you do take to post a comment.

      so chapter 44 is posted and something did happen well hopefully it meets up to your expectations

      and thanks for liking this chapter.

      When I do get sometime I will try a another link for you so that you can view the VM

      Hugs and mwah
      T

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    2. Aww thats so sweet of u...i will wait for sure to watch it.. nd do let me know after uploading another link.. thank u

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  9. Hiii T
    sorry for being late...
    i think i am the one who always comments in the last...
    due to exams i couldnt read the this part..
    thanks for the long update...
    i m shocked with the twist u have taken !!
    i hope priya would be fine...
    cant wait for next part..
    update soon...



    hugs n muahhh
    Fiza

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    1. Hey Babe

      I hope you are ok and hope all went well with your exams and thanks for finding time to read this chapter I know it's hectic with studies and it means a lot that you actually find time for AJR, well AJR loves you lots for that, MWAH

      And as they say save the best for last, well no need for sorry, U here and that's what matters.

      Hugs and mwahs
      T

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  10. It's beautiful, am choked to say something, the pain is seen clearly, god, plz don't do anything to Priya, she doesn't deserve this

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